tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post2600372330542339275..comments2023-10-22T20:53:46.822+05:30Comments on manu-uvaach: ग़ज़लmanuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11264667371019408125noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-79230545271110174372009-01-12T13:07:00.000+05:302009-01-12T13:07:00.000+05:30BAHUT KHOOB.........BAHUT KHOOB.........Poonam Agrawalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08963626868255944558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-72190368657910797082008-12-26T10:24:00.000+05:302008-12-26T10:24:00.000+05:30"वीरान ही देखीं वहाँ, बंगलों की कतारें, / यूँ छोटे..."वीरान ही देखीं वहाँ, बंगलों की कतारें, / यूँ छोटे बड़े घर यहाँ , आबाद बहुत थे"...मनु साब को सलाम इस गज़ल पर और इस जबरदस्त शेर पर दुबारा स्लाम "चट्टान काट कर भी , ना शीरी को पा सका, / जितनो जुगत लगाये, वाँ फरहाद बहुत थे"गौतम राजऋषिhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04744633270220517040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-6051907384235530352008-12-26T08:24:00.000+05:302008-12-26T08:24:00.000+05:30acchi haiacchi haiManoshi Chatterjee मानोशी चटर्जी https://www.blogger.com/profile/13192804315253355418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-76237818329829974502008-12-25T22:35:00.000+05:302008-12-25T22:35:00.000+05:30huzoor aadaab !Hindyugm pr aapke sher parhe.."kyu ...huzoor aadaab !<BR/>Hindyugm pr aapke sher parhe..<BR/>"kyu ret pe utre haiN smandar ke kaafile, kya zeest ko nmi ki zryrzt nahi rahee.."<BR/>ye akela misra (kya zeest ko...)hi<BR/>kisi bhi poori gzl pr bhaari parh sakta hai...mubaarakbaad !<BR/>aur ye saugaat aapke liye...<BR/>"insaaniyat, khuloos, <BR/>wfa, dard.mandiyaaN ,<BR/>ab to kisi bhi shae ki <BR/>hifaazat nahee rahee.."<BR/> ---MUFLIS---daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-24600122815438479522008-12-24T17:22:00.000+05:302008-12-24T17:22:00.000+05:30manuji, aadaab !bahot pyara sher kahaa hai aapne.....manuji, aadaab !<BR/>bahot pyara sher kahaa hai aapne..<BR/>"mila jo dard tera, <BR/>aur la.jwaab hui ,<BR/>meri tarap thi jo khinchkar<BR/>gham.e.shraab hui '<BR/><BR/>Aur ye aapka inaam...<BR/>"hazaar barq kare raqs <BR/>aasmaa mei, magar ,<BR/>kahaaN wo tere tbassum ka<BR/>kuchh jawaab hui..."<BR/>(barq=bijli)(raqs=nritya)<BR/>sher aapke liye bhi hai...<BR/>pasand aaya !?!<BR/> ---MUFLIS---daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-83153666845101803472008-12-24T15:33:00.000+05:302008-12-24T15:33:00.000+05:30इतनी तो ना रुसवा थी ,ये तहरीर-ऐ-ज़हालत,हाँ ,दाना भ...इतनी तो ना रुसवा थी ,ये तहरीर-ऐ-ज़हालत,हाँ ,दाना भी थे कुछ, मगर बेदाद बहुत थे<BR/>wah kya baat hai! <BR/>sabhi sher bahut hi khubsurat hain...magar shikwa liye hue!Alpana Vermahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08360043006024019346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-37084207709155434022008-12-23T23:23:00.000+05:302008-12-23T23:23:00.000+05:30वाह....वाह...वाह...! अब क्या टिप्पणी करूँ..? टिप...वाह....वाह...वाह...! अब क्या टिप्पणी करूँ..? टिप्पणियों में भी तो आप ही उस्ताद हैं...हरकीरत ' हीर'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-72590222825654984872008-12-23T11:02:00.000+05:302008-12-23T11:02:00.000+05:30Aapki Gazal ka har sheyar laajavaab hai . kahin ka...Aapki Gazal ka har sheyar laajavaab hai . kahin kahin shabdon ke arth samjhane me kathinaaii hoti hai .kripya word-meaning bhi likh de to ham jaise anjaan bhi aasaani se samajh paayengeसीमा सचदेवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04082447894548336370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-61771170494144514282008-12-22T09:03:00.000+05:302008-12-22T09:03:00.000+05:30farahaad bahut the...vaah- vaah.......... bahut kh...farahaad bahut the...<BR/>vaah- vaah.......... bahut khooooooooooooob.द्विजेन्द्र ‘द्विज’https://www.blogger.com/profile/16379129109381376790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-919695405968050212008-12-21T09:24:00.000+05:302008-12-21T09:24:00.000+05:30khubsurt gazal or ek khubsurt andaaz... Regardskhubsurt gazal or ek khubsurt andaaz... Regardsseema guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-68948588745939334452008-12-20T16:57:00.000+05:302008-12-20T16:57:00.000+05:30Manuji ! ek bahot hi kaamyaab aur tarahdaar ghazal...Manuji ! ek bahot hi kaamyaab aur tarahdaar ghazal kahi hai aapne.<BR/>ek ek sher mei shaaeest`gi aur pukht`gi khud bolti hai. khyalaat ka ustadaana izhaar...! <BR/>Mubarakbaad qubool farmaaeiN.<BR/>aur ye aapke liye...<BR/>"hum hi n samajh paae <BR/>zmaane ka tqaaza ,<BR/>warnaa to yahaaN zariya.e.emdaad<BR/>bahot tthe.."<BR/> ---MUFLIS---daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-45349892163539988392008-12-20T15:37:00.000+05:302008-12-20T15:37:00.000+05:30मनु भाई किस शेर की तारीफ़ करूं किसकी छोड़ दूंहम तेरी...मनु भाई किस शेर की तारीफ़ करूं किसकी छोड़ दूं<BR/>हम तेरी मसीहाई पे , तोहमत नहीं धरते,कुछ ज़ख्म थे ऐसे भी, जो नाशाद बहुत थे<BR/><BR/>ये फाका मस्तियों का हुनर , तू भी कुछ समझ,इस इल्म के माहिर , तेरे अजदाद बहुत थे<BR/><BR/>वाह वाह मुझे आपके कई शेर भी अच्छे लगते हैं यहां हरेक को लाऊं तो एक और ब्लॉग बन जाएगा।Prakash Badalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04530642353450506019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-4632627563118423982008-12-20T13:32:00.000+05:302008-12-20T13:32:00.000+05:30bahut sundar bhaav poorn rahcna , Gazal bahut ach...bahut sundar bhaav poorn rahcna , <BR/><BR/>Gazal bahut achai ban padi hai .<BR/><BR/>ये फाका मस्तियों का हुनर , तू भी कुछ समझ,इस इल्म के माहिर , तेरे अजदाद बहुत थे<BR/><BR/>kya khoob likha hai .<BR/><BR/>badhai ..<BR/><BR/>Pls visit my blog for new poems..<BR/><BR/>vijay <BR/>http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com/vijay kumar sappattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06924893340980797554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3194802014019372737.post-57684889170817408302008-12-20T09:08:00.000+05:302008-12-20T09:08:00.000+05:30"mili 'muflis' ko daad.e.'betkhallus',khushi se di..."mili 'muflis' ko daad.e.'betkhallus',<BR/>khushi se dil hua<BR/>sarshaar pyaare "<BR/> ---MUFLIS---daanishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15771816049026571278noreply@blogger.com